All Comments on 'Alyssa’s Sweet Ass'

keep gay stories in Gay category.

I normally dont read alot of 1 page stories but this was great i can see potential for a part 2 and maybe 3

Ignore the hater who seems to think any anal sex makes something gay. They have issues. I think it was worded well but maybe a bit fast paced. Would love to hear what would happen in the days to follow.

I don't understand how anal sex between a brother and sister makes the story gay. Taboo maybe, but not gay. Anyway, this story started pretty well, but when it got to the "Truth or Dare" game, everything became too rushed and superficial. Erotica takes time and more character / social development. Keep trying.

I found this story in the taboo/incest stories not gay. 🤷🏻‍♂️

what happened next???

Good premise.

But the sex is autoatic, mechanical, matter-of-fact -- not erotic.

Needs more if the way of preliminaries, foreplay.

OK, for example, someone has to make the noised he/she makes while masturbating. Not a bad idea, but not described enough to be erotic. How about "Show us how you masturbate". Then, "If you were masturbating me, show us how you'd do it."

And you say: ..." as I liked my dick against her rosebud..". LIKED? HUH?

Three stars.

Enjoyable read I actually like short one or two page stories. Playing truth or dare with a sister involved is always great even hotter if it is played with another brother sister team.

Never made it to the gay part of the story because I HATE drugs and stopped right there.

Whoo..., So what happened next? Could their friendship be salvaged after this?

What's gay about having anal sex with a woman? A lot of women love it. Get a clue maybe that's why your relationship don't last, no adventure. Good start, got kinda quick towards the end.

Hot!