All Comments on 'Alyssa's Confession Ch. 02'

.....you must continue

Cant wait for part 3... can only anticipate whats going to happen

Can't wait for more!!!!!!

Part three please......

Just sick for anyone to eat dung.

It makes me want to throw up, and NOT eat it.

Thanks for this, I enjoyed the first part and this has been another tasty treat too.

This is an excellent continuation from the previous part! Takes the scat fetish to a whole new level. I'm not a big fan of scat, but when I am, this is a perfect example of it.

One little niggle is that the digestive system doesn't work in such a way that normal sugars would make it all the way through the intestines and remain in the feces -- because normal sugars are absorbed in the small intestine, and any remaining digestible carbohydrates are digested and used up by the gut flora in the large intestine -- hence the 'recipe' used in the story would not result in feces tasting 'sweet'. As a reader, I just pretended that she had mixed her feces with some sugar or chocolate before making the candies, in order to maintain my 'suspension of disbelief' for the story.

But now that I think about it, there IS actually a way to get sweetening sugars to make it all the way through, and that is with indigestible/non-absorbable sugars. An example of such an indigestible sugar is called Lactulose, and it just so happens that Lactulose is used as an 'osmotic laxative' to treat mild constipation, so it could easily have been used in this story's narrative to make the stool softer and sweeter at the same time. There may be other indigestible sugars that might be even better for such a story-line, I'm not sure.

I like the meta method of the daughter reading the first chapter, that was very clever. Not seen that before , xx

I liked it as such a scenario is just, only just, plausible. The incest is certainly plausuble

, especially if mum was a very young mum , fit, good diet and, 18 years older than daughter. better still if she and daughter had few 'outside friends' and mum had brought her up with lots if cuddles, shared baths , guidance on clothes, underclothes, diet, body care,