by juicemaker
i thought it was a very good, descriptive, passionate attempt at an incest story, especially the mother's quiet resistance. yet, i felt in your story her desire for the forbidden sex she seems to want.
It really sounds like a real story going by the descriptive narration of the writer. Lucky guy! Lovely story !!
I am not sure if these things would happen in India but the story is nicely told and the writer seems to be sincere in his attempt
Aside from a few gramatical errors, this was a very provocative and titillating story. Made me wet!
And any story where a boy gets his hard young cock up the same cunt he came out of is wonderful in my book. A boy's penis and his mother's vagina--made for each other.