All Comments on 'Amanda'

You hetero men, stop being jealous and just admit that sometimes we girls who like girls want something hard and deep inside us, without the bother of a man being involved. This was a beautiful story and I can certainly see them hooking back up later as girlfriends.

I was one of the cheeky men who knocked this story,it was done tongue in cheek,most hetero men find such tales a turn on as I found this.Apology to the author which i hope will be accepted.

I do wish authors would say whether they are male female or whatever,it makes it easier to make a constructive comment.Id do not care what sexual orientation authors are i read Literotica because on the whole i enjoy erotic stories like this ,ido not like silly filth which this definatelly is not.I AM MALE and enjoyed this a great deal.I HOPE THERE IS MORE TO COME

A very, very sexy and Romantic story. I too hope that you will add more to this story, it is so good that it deserves it!!! I also agree with jessijessi34, and with SHOWS A LOT OF PROMISE.To the author I say kudos and 2 thumbs up, keep them coming..

Paul

Funny how many comments are from men. This is exceedingly peculiar. Anyhow, I thoroughly enjoyed this story. It wasn't trashy like most are and it was very well-written. A good fifteen minutes spent.--Kristina

Oh My God!!!

Seriously this piece of writing feels real and awesome.. To be frank I came with your writings...

2 Thumbs up!!! Pls keep up the good work!

Perfect.. a 100% satisfaction and a total turn-on.. hahaha..

Hope to get some more juicy write-ups from you again!

Good luck!

Ur admirer!

:)

Please carry this story on!! thanks

We want more!

Great. So great. Only, I wish, you'd gone on in much greater detail re the sex, the fucking, and especially this last part...Ahhh nice. Thank you.

This was a nice sweet and erotic one. I, like most men, love to read about two women getting together and making passionate love. This was just that. Although I did feel that the description of the sex scenes could have been a bit more longer. But this definitely has promise for a sequel. Maybe this time Anne can visit LA. :)

I've read many stories here. Some excellent. "Beautiful Thing" author is very good. But you had perfect balance. Just the right amount of intrigue and plot. The juiciest sex I've read here. I'd have loved it if you'd gone another two-three pages with 2/3 being the sex.

You made my heart pound. I got savagely wet. Never before reading these have I wanted to be "you" in the story as I did this time. I'll be back again and again. Please write more on this one.

I had to wash the chair pad I'm sitting, or after I got so aroused, was leaning against. Smells like pussy; probably always will too.

Let's just say I'm glad I couldn't mount the keyboard and computer...

THANK YOU!

My clitoris got hard reading this. I masturbated and came hard. Hope to read more soon.

But I so wanted them to become an item before the end, it upset me a little that they didn't

short, very hot, great finale, and most surprised she had bush-very nice