All Comments on 'Amanda & I'

Very erotic. Had me cuming.

That was a good opener ! Kept me wanting to read more.

Stumbled across this story by chance while just idly whizzing through the lists and I don't know if you're reading comments after eight years or so. Anyway, just in case, here goes. "Amanda and I" is nicely written and my one criticism is that it's rather short and ends abruptly. I think you could have made a good deal more of this, developing plot and characterisation to improve reader satisfaction. Oh, and would "I" have really been in a fit state to drive after "...half dozen drinks..."? Just curious.