by Vincent21
Can we get a Hina and Max love story? They have great chemistry together. Maybe Hina can get pregnant with Max's baby and Amanda can raise the child as her own.
Remember the girl that caught them in the shower? Bring her back and get her involved in a threesome. She just felt like a tiny loose end that had some potential
Enjoyed your story very much. Nice to read about young people discovering and enjoying themselves at the same time. One wished more people could share and try more together. Noted some comments that other readars wanted your story to stay lesbian. As this is about young people I like that it deals with all the posibilities of sex.
One wish boys could be as open as your girls are. And I see many possible continuations where both girls could share both girls and boys, even if it would be incest it could be open and educating for them all. And very enjoyable for us readers.
So once again thanks for a great story and looking forward to read more of your work!
Nice scenario, but the writing is too matter-of-fact, seems like a summary. Throes, not throws. Peeked, not peaked.