All Comments on 'Amanda's Mistress'

A very hot opening chapter doe with skill and care xxxxx

Intense eroticism!

Wow!

More, please….

An excellently written short story giving a vivid description of the start of a sub’s journey.

Nice short effort, BUT you didn't finish the usual full set of 6 strokes on Bobbi! So maybe continue the story using that as a handy nexus into the next chapter?

Great to see you writing again Bobbi * smiles * And your words painted a very erotic scene, very well done

No one like you.

It’s about me, but I wish I was in the story right now and then xxx I’ve readed it over and over again and I never get tired of it.

AmandaCelina96 - Yes my sweet young Pet, my Good Little Girl. It seems that you captivated an old girl's heart. You are a part of every story I am writing. There will be more of our adventures when I make the time. But someone is more important these days.

A playful loving Dom trying to bring a sub in line. Counting the hits, getting dominated by the use of orifices, manipulating the breasts and forced orgasm. Well done.