All Comments on 'Amanda's Secret Job'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
great ending.. a surprise!!

outstanding!!!

jakkjakkalmost 20 years ago
wow

man that was one hot story i loved the way it played out and the ending was a great twist hinting that she wanted it not that she felt she had to do it loved this story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
great surprise

a magnificent ending to a well written story. more please!

FabdisasturFabdisasturalmost 20 years ago
Funny ending

Great ending, had me laughing for five minutes. Keep up the good work and keep 'em coming.

jimd51jimd51almost 20 years ago
Absolutely Wonderful

Good Story!!! Kept the tenseness right up to the end--and what an ending. Looking forward to more!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Only a Waitress?!

"...Daddy I'm only a waitress.." Sheesh! I can't help but wonder: What're the Dancers like?!! or do they even matter. Better yet...forget the dancers!! That ending elevated the story "above par";keep on writing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Sheesh

Sheesh,

Great ending!!

Dont stop writing

G

doormousedoormousealmost 20 years ago
HOT!!!!!!!!!

Damn!!!! That was HOT!!!!!

Can't wait for more of your stories!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
very well written

That was an Excellent story. The beginning was very convincing with the characters emotions, and the ending was fabulous, just the right twist to give the story a humorous edge and completely throw off the "moral high-ground"

Monagamous_NowMonagamous_Nowover 12 years ago
Very hot....

I loved the build-up to the sex ... and the surprise ending.

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