by carl_a
man that was one hot story i loved the way it played out and the ending was a great twist hinting that she wanted it not that she felt she had to do it loved this story
a magnificent ending to a well written story. more please!
Great ending, had me laughing for five minutes. Keep up the good work and keep 'em coming.
Good Story!!! Kept the tenseness right up to the end--and what an ending. Looking forward to more!!!
"...Daddy I'm only a waitress.." Sheesh! I can't help but wonder: What're the Dancers like?!! or do they even matter. Better yet...forget the dancers!! That ending elevated the story "above par";keep on writing.
Damn!!!! That was HOT!!!!!
Can't wait for more of your stories!!!!!
That was an Excellent story. The beginning was very convincing with the characters emotions, and the ending was fabulous, just the right twist to give the story a humorous edge and completely throw off the "moral high-ground"
I loved the build-up to the sex ... and the surprise ending.