All Comments on 'Amber Ch. 02'

A great continuation.

I thoroughly enjoyed this second chapter. I am looking forward to the third. Not trying to rush you because taking your time on this second one, you did the story justice! Love it!!!

This story has me enthralled... please continue

It is a little frustrating though as you can see how it could be developed further in novel form. Make no mistake this material and talent should be in novel form and would be a huge sucess.

Thanks for sharing x

LNC

Thank you for making Amber less of a doormat. I hope you don't have her just run back into Dani's arms. Don't let Amber forget that Dani has a lot to answer for.

I would not DARE to tell someone as talented as you, how to do something that you obviously have a fantastic talent for .....

however, although the differing timelines worked in the first part, and to some degree in this one, I hope that a solitary thread of time could be considered for future parts :)

I love this series I love everything about it and I can't wait for more chapters to come

I loved the first chapter and I love the second.

Looking forward to the continuation.

Another five from me.

You definitely can write storys to getting an heartstroke ...... The idea the concept this jumping around is fabulous and it intense the fires of the plot ...... Great style and tale

Sorry.

The timelines here are just creating confusion as far as I'm concerned.

One moment it's I hate you, then they are in bed, then missing Dani before hating her again.

Maybe if you numbered each section so that we could read them in order afterwards?

Lexi

Too short too short….should be sleep but need to know how it ends