All Comments on 'Amber in the Rain'

Liked it a lot. Well written.

(But learn the difference between 'lose' and 'loose'.)

Beautifully written, exquisitely paced, delicate and teasing and intense. Wow wow wow. Reading your writing is like being carefully fucked.

One of the best stories I have read on Literotica. Superbly written, stunningly erotic, beautifully constructed, amazingly arousing. Can you guess - I loved it. I have written some stories of my own and yours inspires me to do even better. You set a standard that is going to be hard to match.

Fabulous! Amber is a delightful character. What a delicious read today. I fortunately found out about your other Amber story by seeing this story today. Please continue!

I love how you built up the tension between the characters, and their body language was awesome. Excellent :)

I could almost see the water dripping off the puckered nipple. Very erotic.

that was effn awesome!! and so hot, loved it!!!