All Comments on 'Amber's Dirty Party'

Poor him.

Thank you for sharing your work, it was really, really well done on many levels. A good, interesting plot, nice tension and believable, good pacing, lots of action and some really unique, kinky scenarios. Only thing I would have liked to see was a bit more of her interactions with tom and sara; they seemed a little skimmed over on the rush to the party.

PLEASE CONTINUE THIS! Lots of interesting plot lines that I'd love to see developed - the potential with Sara/Jeff, the classmates, and of course the mysterious job. I'd hate to see so much potential skipped!

Again, thanks for sharing your work!

would love to read more on this story