All Comments on 'Amber's Enslavement Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
How will it end?

Well written as usual - kudos to you and your proofreader. Hopefully, things will not work out the way the slavers planned...

XantuXantualmost 16 years ago
Eager to read more...

I am looking forward to how Amber comes to terms with her sexuality and accepts her fate. xantu

DragonDreamerDragonDreameralmost 16 years ago
Wow!

Can't wait to read more. This is a fascinating beginning!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
I like it very much

I really like this story the more I read it. I've been a fan of yours for some time now and I enjoy the quality of work you bring. I can't wait to read the next......

DryhillDryhillalmost 13 years ago
EXCELLENT

This is a very good second chapter and so far proves this is going to be an excellent story. More characterization and Amber's emotions coming through nicely now.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
wow great story.

but no ending, thats cruel and unusual punishment

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