All Comments on 'Amber's New Job Ch. 01'

Absolutely loved this story how lucky can a girl get.

how long does she stay with them, does she leave after school, or does she join the firm as a new lawyer with a new place to live?does she stay in their bed or move on to a man of her own?

why was this in the lesbian section and not group?if i wanted a groupd fuck i would read about group fucks.just because you didnt describe the fuck between them as good as you did with her and the wife doesnt make this a lesbian story.

Quite possibly one of the most non sexy lines ever written. This story, besides being in the wrong category, turned out to be a complete turn-off.

If it were in the proper section. Any introduction of a cock into a sexual situation with the ladies makes it group sex. Put it there and you'll probably receive better reviews. I have to agree with redlion, kind of a turn off with Ron involved.

Is there some place where the story groups are defined? This is not the first time I have had readers complain about the category in which I have placed a story. I'm not trying too mislead anyone; it felt more like a lesbian story than a group story to me since I tried to make the relationship between Amber and Michelle the focus with Ron as a secondary player. However, if that meets the definition of a group story I certainly would have had no problem putting it there.

To those who enjoyed it, thanks. For those who did not I hope you find other things I have written more pleasing.

great story cant wait to see where this goes.

In answer to your question, I don't think that the categories are very clearly delineated anywhere. As a rule of thumb though, if you post in Lesbian Sex and one of your "lesbians" takes an interest in the outcome of a guy's hardon, it will be rated substantially lower than a work of the same quality in another category.

Think of it as flashing if it helps. Most people don't appreciate uninvited penises, and some vote their offense.

I read the first 3rd or so of this story and got off. I read negative criticism here about the story but personally from what I read I did enjoy it. I am a lesbian and looked in the lesbian category and was pleased to find this. I did not read further then the first third but the first third was amazing!

MA, it has always been a sensitive subject how to accurately describe a story or even the separate chapters and have them posted in the genre you, the author, intended.

Sometimes the Literotica Admins will intervene if they are of the opinion that a story should go into a different category then the writer designated.

I have seen a number of criticisms by readers when they run into a story that they are of the opinion was listed in a misleading category.

For one of my latest stories posted "Last Man Standing", I deliberately chose to enter it in the Mature Category, though the main characters are late-20s/early30's.

I wanted to make a point in this story, that the issues I raise are Mature subjects and the heroic characters are acting like adults against the perpetual adolescence of the villains.

In my stories I sadistically abuse the dead religion of Academic English. When I include a sex scene in my stories, they tend to be sparsely written. As I am mocking the ridiculous boredom of most pornography.

I'm not sorry to be laughing outloud every time I see mindlessly repeated the stupidity of someone giving a blowjob to a dildo.

After reading some of the comments. The lesbian filter did not bother me at all. Altho I felt it lacked suspense. As in we had sex three more times last nite. Really. Of couse I kept reading. I too was drawn to the lesbian catagory. An I was happy with the results of your

writing.

Was hoping to find out what the other girls job responsibility's were.

Dyn-o-mite! Was pandering to the jury ethical? Five stars.

Fantastic!