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Click here"Amber, women like us never do anything we find uncomfortable. He has other women for that."
I licked; it trembled and shook. I swallowed the head, working it with my tongue and cheeks. I spit it out and Michelle and I covered it with kisses, occasionally letting our tongues and lips play against each other, her thick silken hair cascading against my face. She took one of his fat balls in her mouth while lovingly touching and caressing his body. I frigged his shaft and kissed and licked the head, focusing on the sensitive skin directly under the crown. Ron's eyes were shut, basking in pleasure. Soon he grunted and Michelle cooed as his cum evacuated his testicles, shooting up his cock. I locked my lips over his piss hole just in time to capture every drop.
We headed for the bedroom and one more good fuck before I went home.
- COMMENTS
bobwhyalmost 5 years agoWas hoping to find out what the other girls job responsibility's were.
liz33ndabout 9 years agoAfter reading some of the comments. The lesbian filter did not bother me at all. Altho I felt it lacked suspense. As in we had sex three more times last nite. Really. Of couse I kept reading. I too was drawn to the lesbian catagory. An I was happy with the results of your
writing.
fanfareover 9 years agoMA, it has always been a sensitive subject how to accurately describe a story or even the separate chapters and have them posted in the genre you, the author, intended.
Sometimes the Literotica Admins will intervene if they are of the opinion that a story should go into a different category then the writer designated.
I have seen a number of criticisms by readers when they run into a story that they are of the opinion was listed in a misleading category.
For one of my latest stories posted "Last Man Standing", I deliberately chose to enter it in the Mature Category, though the main characters are late-20s/early30's.
I wanted to make a point in this story, that the issues I raise are Mature subjects and the heroic characters are acting like adults against the perpetual adolescence of the villains.
In my stories I sadistically abuse the dead religion of Academic English. When I include a sex scene in my stories, they tend to be sparsely written. As I am mocking the ridiculous boredom of most pornography.
I'm not sorry to be laughing outloud every time I see mindlessly repeated the stupidity of someone giving a blowjob to a dildo.
Anonymousover 9 years agoI read the first 3rd or so of this story and got off. I read negative criticism here about the story but personally from what I read I did enjoy it. I am a lesbian and looked in the lesbian category and was pleased to find this. I did not read further then the first third but the first third was amazing!
LesbianChickLitover 9 years agoIn answer to your question, I don't think that the categories are very clearly delineated anywhere. As a rule of thumb though, if you post in Lesbian Sex and one of your "lesbians" takes an interest in the outcome of a guy's hardon, it will be rated substantially lower than a work of the same quality in another category.
Think of it as flashing if it helps. Most people don't appreciate uninvited penises, and some vote their offense.
MaryAndersonover 9 years agoAuthorIs there some place where the story groups are defined? This is not the first time I have had readers complain about the category in which I have placed a story. I'm not trying too mislead anyone; it felt more like a lesbian story than a group story to me since I tried to make the relationship between Amber and Michelle the focus with Ron as a secondary player. However, if that meets the definition of a group story I certainly would have had no problem putting it there.
To those who enjoyed it, thanks. For those who did not I hope you find other things I have written more pleasing.
SwampThang1892over 9 years agoIf it were in the proper section. Any introduction of a cock into a sexual situation with the ladies makes it group sex. Put it there and you'll probably receive better reviews. I have to agree with redlion, kind of a turn off with Ron involved.
