All Comments on 'Amber's Tale Ch. 02'

Very nicely written. I would have never expected Amber to agree to do something like this. Keeps me wondering what will happen next. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Thanks! I'm glad someone is reading them. I'm submitting chapter 3 tonight, and should post chap 4 in the next few days. Thanks again!

Sure would like to get to know Michael and Amber ... And watch them in action ;-) ... the voyeur in me ... :-)

I'm wanting to be Michael...Is he gone to Cal Tech now? :+))

I REALLY like how natural this feels. How open and caring and sharing...

All Good Stuff!

Part One of this is my first story of yours...So I'm confused

by all the names. And which is whose...and past...and present?

And I don't know if you're Amber...or Jessie...or Cheerleader whomever?

I don't care. I want to be there!

THAT is good writing! :+))