by Jessie92
Thanks for reading and commenting! Glad you are enjoying it! I've started a second series but its not doing so well, If you get a chance let me know what you think of it too!
Thanks again!
This was a short chapter, but you never fail to amaze me! I would have definitely never have expected this, which is something I like about your writing, always keeps me wondering what will happen next. Really can't wait to see what more you have in store for us. Keep up the great work.
I like your writting style and your storys. I love it when the characters have live and not only names. I love it too then there is a real story and not only sex. Your Amber and your Jessie storys have both of it. Go on with that and I will go on with reading and voting :-)
Great story. I have read all parts of this story and look forward to reading more.
Thanks Grandpahoot, I sort of set this story aside a year or so back, although I have it planned out for 20 or so chapters and the characters intertwine with some of my others. I may get back to it soon though.
I have now read all your stories and really enjoy your writing. Hope you continue to add more.
Looking forward to the continuation of Michael and Amber's story ...
I like Amber...A LOT!
I especially like how naturally you combine your prose and dialog.
They match.
For me, personally, I enjoy learning what women are thinking!!! :+))
The eternal mystery! :+))
Oh...CUTE that she doesn't distinguish between USC and Cal Tech. :+))
(Forgive me, I'm a Bruin! :+)))
Am I missing the part where they had sex for the first time or did it get dropped? Your writing is great so sad to miss out.
i know this post ended years ago but damn would i love to see a chapter 4