All Comments on 'Ambushed'

I came for the small head, stayed for the big head, ended up happy all around.

I am certain there is a "Romance Story" buried somewhere in the 2-pages, however for me it read mostly like a "Ph D Dissertation & Thesis Defense". Ambushed just contained excessive technical discussions for me to enjoy the "subplot of 2-beautiful women" starting a Romance.

Did not rate the story, since I felt it would not be fair to the Author.

The characters both claim to be from US locations, yet both exclusively use verbiage from the UK. You are clearly a highly intelligent author, but the lack of language continuity grated on my nerves from the very beginning.

Your prose was outstanding. I don't think I have read a more enticing story. Wonderful.

I'm easy. Give me academia, give me language, give me two intense lesbians who take a while to figure out what's going on between them... Thanks for sharing <3