All Comments on 'Ambushed'

That was fun - and a bit confusing at times!!

Nice, but what an abrupt ending. What happened? Did he drill them both? One riding his cock, the other his face? Any mother-daughter action? Man, I hope so. They both seem freaky enough. I truly hope you have a followup.

Jedd

Pretty hot. Did Jim ever have sex with Elise? If not, he should.

Liked it to a point. I do hope that Tamara's husband finds out and shoots Jim's dick off. Divorce would be the only option, after he got out of jail.

Drugged, there's some room for forgiveness, months of worshipping some bog dick is unforgivable.

Hope there is more to cum of this story. Certainly lots of possibilities.

I agree with Angela, that WAS fun!

That was hot, AF. Agree - Jim/Elise should pair up.

Long-term - Jim/Cindy, maybe?

So may ways this could continue...

Great story and well written. It needs a followup as you left a whole bunch of unanswered questions.

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Cheers

Totally agree with @Ginafrommaine

I absolutely love reading poorly written comments that tell the author what to do next. The story was hot and the writing is solid. I genuinely hope the author continues, and not just to infuriate the cuck in the comments section.

Poor, poor Jim. LOL. Good work.

Great job. Points for originality.

Very, very nice.

Hot, but terrible time to end the story...right at the start of a potentially epic scene. Had to drop down to 4 stars because of that.

A rolicking tale! Reminiscent of Denny Wheeler's "Slumber Party" on alt.sex.stories.moderated back in the day.

Nope, nope, nope...this is DEFINITELY NOT a four star story...

IT IS A FIVE**5**STAR STORY...deserves accolades for the author, as this is a bit different in it's theme...Dad is resistant, even at the end...yet goes along with the "ambushing"!!

Jim has been alone, and bitter, and repressed, for so long; it is only fitting that all the girls ganged up on him to free up his feelings and desires!! And Tamara is really a nice addition to his life.

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I would have expected him to be a whole lot more pissed at Philip for going along with drugging his daughter for sex and then being jokey the next day. Then again, it is a fantasy story...

Firstly imho this was a non-con group story, so poorly classified, but it does fall between the normal lines for those categories, but the nub of the story is non-con so that should have been the deciding factor, secondly as per @JohnSimms comment, I’d have expected him to be incandescent about his step-daughter being effectively drugged and raped, not to mention the lack of anger at Kyan peddling roofie drugs and then raping the Mother who he already knew socially?

This would have been a really good story had it not been for the inconsistencies, the writing is good, the story flows well and the characters are realistic, as it is it’s a 4⭐️ for me. Thanks for writing and posting, cheers Ppfzz.

Great story, top-notch writing. Loved the way you build a scene. But this really belongs in non-consent/reluctance. I've favorited it, gave it five stars. But as a reader, when I hit the part where they were drugged, it almost killed the story for me. Which is a shame because it is a great story, by a great writer.