All Comments on 'American Girl'

VERY well written, both characterization and plot. Not over-written, but with complexity woven into the story in ways that did not weigh it down. Excellent. No more needed for this story, but more stories please. Thank you.

Amazing. Great job on the story, my favorite part was Rafia and Mr. Smith :3

This story was so good it had me turned on the whole time. Mr Smith is the shit keep writing more pls and maybe spend more time describing the sex and the physical feels too thanks

Extremely well done. My only surprise is that none of the boys finished in her mouth.

I love your bitter erotica.

I think you're saying it's a story that's not sweet and I'll agree with you there. :)

Nothing Better than taking a Girl's Anal Cherry and then an Ass to Moth Clean-up...

Yes, sir. First time, best time!