by Zev95
Sorry about the formatting, I meant to have the first-person segments in italics to differentiate them from the third-person stuff, but it didn't work out apparently. Still, I think it's easy enough to tell what's monologue and what's action.
You really captured the voice of each character in the monologue. Bravo! I agree that this needs a sequel. Please consider writing one. In the meantime, I'll be reading your other stories.