All Comments on 'American Lavender'

by YDB95

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oggbashanoggbashanover 4 years ago

A great twist on my story. Thanks.

joeyjaxjoeyjaxover 4 years ago

Beautifully done, YDB!

vanmyers86vanmyers86over 4 years ago

Delightful and joyous, as always!

KingBandorKingBandorover 4 years ago

Who was Dave? Right when Renee and Tom are talking about Penny she calls him Dave.

I also found it odd that Tom had no reaction at all when Renee essentially offered to sleep with him. She said something about "if you want to explore anything while you are here"... And he had 0 reaction instead he brought up Penny.

Great story, though.

LoquiSordidaAdMeLoquiSordidaAdMeover 4 years ago

Great little ghost story. I haven't read Ogg's original, but now I'll have to. In tone and style, it did remind me of his work. Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Good story. A few slips (proofreader?) but otherwise very readable. Better than the original.

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