All Comments on 'Amnesia Ch. 01'

Well-written, interesting and engaging, makes us want to see how this plays out. I'll look forward to the continuation.

Thanks, ohio

This is really good! There are so many paths to an ending here, I look forward to finding out which way it goes.

Accident of some kind?

Cheating wife and boyfriend tried to knock him off?

A jealous husbands revenge?

Have fun with it and I will enjoy your work.

Thanks for what looks like an excellent story.

A very interesting beginning. A setting/location would be nice, just for reference. I can't claim to know much about "real-life" amnesia, but the story as presented certainly sounds plausible. (Besides, it's probably one of those matters with no rule book and scant more than a guideline.) Anyway; looks like a good story.

-- KK in Texas

from one of my favorite authors.

Good start, one can really see these people and sense the flow of things. I look forward to the next installment.

The story seems like fun, and our hero shows signs of

being a highly creative person who should be missed somewhere. For some reason (Detective Sergeant?), I thought

we were in England, then Mr. Leung came up with dollars!

Perhaps Coaster has taken us back to British Columbia.

Don't they have the equivalent of CSI there to tell him

at least what happened to him! Loved it and can't wait

for the next chapter...

I like the story flow and 3-dimensional characters.

I'm looking forward to each instalment.

excellent story

I liked this first chapter very much...and am anticipating the same as I read on!

Interested to see where this goes.

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I would think that doctors could tell the difference between getting hit by a car or beaten up!

Isn't there some procedure to get identities for amnesia victims with no friends or family? How do they do their taxes?

I have partial amnesia from a work related injury, Unlike John, I can remember the past, it is the present I have a hard time keeping track of.

The anger and frustration that John expresses at the beginning is exactly what I felt. I was, and still am, swearing much more than I have in the past. Like John, I have come to accept the new me. Doesn't mean I like it or that I am not frustrated by it, but that I have come to accept that I know I won't remember when my kids come to visit.