All Comments on 'Amnesty Program'

Nice start. Needs a few more chapters on how they continue with the program and the various tasks assigned. Also if they finally make love for the 1st time.

This is a very good start to a possible series of stories based on the Amnesty. I thought it started out well and the ending didn't disappoint.

I rarely comment ... but this story brings back some lovely college memories (like about 40 years ago) .... similar kind of situation ..... and there is LOTS more to happen, I am certain!!!

Real people, real story, real writing. Thank you.

As someone already said, I love stories with "real people." I suspect that their professors actually had match-making in mind when when introduced the "experiment" in order to encourage two social misfits to be together who would normally never take the time otherwise. Maybe that could be in part 2.

It was exciting from start to finish ... awesome! More, please.....

Keep this story going please

Well done. Looking forward to the next few chapters...

Very nice start to a very interesting story I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Very good I hope their special project goes a number of chapters.

I really enjoyed it, and can't wait for more.

Oh, good story. ADD MORE.

A fun story, There's more to come because she has already planed on them fucking by saying she was going to the doctors.

I think it will make for a very enjoyable next chapter if you keep to the story line as it is now.

Looking foreword to part 2

After all, we DO need to find *something* to criticize! It's not normal for a story to be engaging and not have a misplaced comma, or dangling (okay, not much of anything was dangling) participle.

Like the others, I admit to wanting to see "what's next!"

I never comment. But this story is incredible. More please.

Very well written, definitely pulled me in.

I sincerely hope you continue this story. Loved it!

I was a fan of the Darkroom series. Loved the story and can't wait to read more!

this has a lot of ways it could go, hope to see which way it does

This story line has great potential! Left me wanting more, soon!

This is the first of your stories that I have read and it was superb. I liked it so much, that I read all your other submissions at one sitting. What can I say except keep up the good work!

Excellent start - thanks for sharing....

Innocent. Intimate. Tender. Caring and considerate. The excitement of exploring.

The awakening that occurs with the first bonding with another. WOW.

Please continue to develop this story line.

hope there is more soon, keep writing

Hey, your story was amazing! it held it's climax till the end, unlike the others who lose focus in between. Hats off, as this is just your first attempt! Expecting more from you, but this time BETTER, BIGGER AND HORNIER :P ;)....

Keep up the awesome work mate!!!

Please keep going. A part two would be great.

Awesome story! Please keep going!

excellent story, .. please continue the storyline

This was great, I would love to see a continuation of this story.

Hi, totally love the story, the build up, and the tension...was all perfect, and even though you could sort of guess where itwas heading, you managed to keep suspense till the very end!!!

Would totally LOVE to read more, or hear from you, and get to know you a little better,

Mark

This is an excellent story. I'd love to see more...

That was a lot of fun to read. Loved the characters.

Encore! Encore!

A great fantasy, very arousing but engaging

I have returned to your page dozens of times in the past year and a half looking to see if you'd posted something new since you finished the Darkroom series. Your writing is original and refreshing. You create real and vivid characters, and place them in very erotic (and unconventional) situations. It's a delight to read your stories.

So glad you have started a new story. Please let me know when you write more!

This story has serious potential, loved the first chapter.

That was so beautiful. As a smart kid who decided to slack off and disappoint rather than overachieve, I can't say that I was ever in their place... but I definitely understand. A very sweet, adorable story. Bravo! :)

How come all these lucky characters get all the fun.

Liked it a LOT.

A Distinctive Concept!

Bravo for that!

Nice work throughout!

This is a solid start to what should evolve into either a novella or a novel. First mutual masturbation. Then ... well, that's up to you, Ambidextrous. You'll need some conflict - I would suggest religious as a possibility due to Jason's having been home-schooled, as one common motivator for home-school is religious beliefs vs secular teachings - and maybe a temporary breakup before a final resolution that puts them together. Spread the time over at least two years, and three might be better, including their living together after the photog roomie moves out.

I feel this has the potential to be a real Literotica hit if extended.

Liked the masturbation start.

Sweet slow buildup, brainy!

but it looks absurd when a hairy old guy does it.

amazing story, so well done.

I return to this story every so often and it remains at the top of my “best ever” list. I like the characters, I like the progression of their confidence, it is no less great 11 years later.

Lovely premise.

Could have used more 'exploration' and getting to know each other's body.

Including his balls.

Including her ass.

WE learned what they didn't like about watching porn. Surely there had to be some scenarios each liked. They could have discussed that/those. They could have looked at some together.

Four stars.