by Axteuffel
This is just fantasy, it wouldn't happen like this at all, so try it, you may or may not like it, but it will change your marriage.
I'd hate to think what a first story I'd concoct in another language that I was not at all familiar with. Keep writing.
Your tongue will have a DIRECT bearing on the outcum of this tale! Continue, please.
Written better than some whose English is their native tongue. Good story, except the gay parts, could have done without them. Please continue.
What happened to Esther at the end? And why did Susan become two people?
Pitiful.