All Comments on 'Among Friends'

by Axteuffel

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Not Close

This is just fantasy, it wouldn't happen like this at all, so try it, you may or may not like it, but it will change your marriage.

fumundacheezefumundacheezeabout 14 years ago
Good

I'd hate to think what a first story I'd concoct in another language that I was not at all familiar with. Keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago

Great story please write more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
loved it

great story!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Whatever your Native TONGUE...

Your tongue will have a DIRECT bearing on the outcum of this tale! Continue, please.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
You could have fooled me, if English isn't your native tongue

Written better than some whose English is their native tongue. Good story, except the gay parts, could have done without them. Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago

the gay parts turned me on alot, it was hot continue

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Get a proofreader

You desperately need an editor. Tons of errors.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Definitely get a proofreader

What happened to Esther at the end? And why did Susan become two people?

Pitiful.

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