All Comments on 'Among Friends Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
mmmmmmm

wih it d kissid liwas longer,and involved muum and girlfriend licking up the cum

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichabout 14 years ago
A good erotic start

Too short for a complete story,but a good start to a series.

Seducing mom to be his lover or cum slut would be a good chapter, and mom and girl friend fucking him at the same time would be a good read.

I enjoyed what you have here and hope to see more soon. Thanks

mondliecht57mondliecht57about 14 years ago
Short and to the point

Thinking in one language and translating those thoughts into words of another language requires skill that others who attempt this haven't mastered yet. You did a pretty good job here. Story could have been a little longer, maybe a little more background detail of the main characters, but not necessary. Overall it was well written and obviously a continuation is required. Thanks for a good read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Good

This story needs more chapters to flesh it out.

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