All Comments on 'Amor Ex Machina Ch. 01'

Ready for more.

This is a great concept. I appreciate the depth, assuming there will be someone after Tim in a few chapters. Or maybe after his first making up... looking forward to this. I do hope the other ongoing stories will also proceed.

Person of Interest, but with love rather than crime?

An interesting start. Although I hate this new habit u have of such short installments. 2 pages just aren’t enough. I like the potential for what you have started here but please do not neglect the stories that you have already created and r ongoing.

Looking forward to more. Also wondering what life would be like if everyone had a little voice in their ear acting as a guide.

I’m hooked. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

I like the story premise, it really leaves room for many different story lines. The writing is good, especially the grammar. I a. Looking forward to the next installment.

Great start to what promises to be a great new series from one of my favorite writers!

Very timely topic presented in a very creative manner. You own these ideas. Let us have them as you see fit. Maybe you are an ALI and have already gotten into our heads. Whatever... Great!

Very interesting start to a new series. I look forward to you delving deep into the AI vs big data vs privacy. I secretly hope for another harem story line. Thanks for sharing your creations with us

Fascinating concept and well written.

I'm looking forward to following the story.

I agree with rather previous comment regarding profanity. Perhaps Tim will tire of it?

This has me hooked... hope Ch 02 is coming soon!

Beautiful, you set me up completely with those last 2 sentences. I need a second fix ASAP. 5⛤

Oh... I think we're all in for a fun ride.

this is gonna be good.

This is going to awesome! Very good start.

ChatGPT sex councilor goes rogue!

Really like the concept of this story giving an AI a personality and developing emotions through living them via a human and then using that to find a match has a lot of potential. The teaser at the end about the AI telling lies has added a new twist to the situation, mainly why would the AI lie, what does the AI get out of misleading her human link. I look forward to finding out the AI's reasons.

Starting out great. I am looking forward to the next chapters.

I'm liking where this is going!!

Great start. One point: Asimov s three laws were written by him as a foil and could never work. This stores were meant as proof of that, each examining a possible mode of failure. I work in this industry, so take a tip and look up "AI Missalignment problem". It will lead to far more interesting stories.

I'm no fucking prude, but all her cursing is off putting. Almost to the level is unreadable.

This looks like the start of something spectacular! Eagerly awaiting the next update. I do agree with OpenWords’ comment, that the profanity is more distracting than it needs to be. I admire CP’s usual precision in word selection; the richness of the English language allows a greater range of creativity. Thank you for sharing your talents with us.

Re the cursing - it's distracting in a story about especially the sort of well written stuff you do CP. Can I suggest cursing between Tom Hanks and Jon Stewart but closer to Jon Stewart.

I see a lot Chekhov guns being laid around the scene - looking forward to future instalments

Willing to read the next chapter

Hmmmmmm interesting start

Starting out great. Looking forward to more of it.

Loving it so far.

Please continue. Interesting. Ia ALi. The perfect match?