All Comments on 'Amorous Goods: Black Pearls'

You're creating a universe of very memorable characters!

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Another great story. Thanks.

This one RAWKS!!! Looking forward to the next!

Found it a little difficult and slow going as you set the story out but perhaps that was me; been a tiring day. Then it picked up and rose to a great climax, excuse the pun. Loved it.

Read a few before but need to go back and check . Look forward to Yi and Kenny in Agent Ai.

I do not want to introduce any spoilers by stating something in the comments that I should not. So let me just say that I really enjoyed this story. It was well written and took me on a journey.

Ok ok, I do need to say one thing ... Agent AI !!!!! Lol

On the very first page, you started swapping characters around and confusing me. At first you had Kenny and Yi as a couple and Mike and Audrey were another couple. Then you started saying that Mike was having problems with Yi. I believe that was a continuity error. At 9 literotica pages, I'm guessing that you have something like 45,000 words in this story. I'm sorry, if you are having editing issues that early in this then I'm not going to spend all night trying to decode it and figure it out.

Thank you for pointing that out Tex, luckily it was a one time occurrence

I also had trouble at the beginning. But the story was excellent and I look forward to reading the next one. Thanks.

That was F'n awesome! And I had no trouble grasping what you were talking about. All one had to do was keep reading. If someone is having comprehension problems like that, maybe it's not the author, maybe it's...well, you know. 5/5 stars and eagerly await Agent Ai.

Dewey Cheatham

Loved the story