All Comments on 'Amorous Goods: The Cameo Pendant'

Excellent first go. Thanks for an entertaining read.

Wonderfully erotic. 5 stars.

Holly did this. Holly did that. Holly did some5ing else. Ry o vary the paragraphs and actions,sounds like a report. Small tip- start every sentence and paragraph with a different world. Good luck and keep writing.

Great story. I loved the way it progressed. Too many stories go from zero to 60 way to fast. It’s the journey that makes it very exciting.

It would seem that from the title that you had a whole series of "Amorous Goods" in mind. With the obvious success of this one, you should consider pursuing that thought and produce more excellent stories. Nice read and quite erotic. Keep writing, please!