All Comments on 'Amorous Goods: The Victrola'

I enjoyed that very much

You have an amazing imagination @saddletramp1956. I enjoyed this escape from the usual, the “norm” (whatever that really is). Thank you.

Liked the story - but a 1957 Chevy without a spec of rust and no fluids leaking - just as impossible as the rest of the story!

"and a big horn attached to the needle." lol. Stating that the horn is attached to the needle is like stating that the house is attached to the door.

You have done once again. I'm thinking quite seriously of dropping you a line re suggesting a setting for another story or perhaps a set of stories. I do like your paranormal settings. I think I may be related to Justus O Peace!

Extremely inventive and a fun read. You never disappoint. Five stars all the way through. Thanks for publishing it.

Weird and very imaginative and creative.

Not our favorite type of lit work and hardly a Loving Wife tale, but an interesting read.

How many fingers did you pour to create this script?

We got through it, but??????

SW

Your mind works in mysterious ways! *5* Loved it....

I truly enjoyed this story. Thank you for the fantasy.

Ed

Your stories are so much fun and what an imagination!

Really a different approach to Loving Wives! Far out but I thoroughly enjoyed it!!

Jim

Saddle tramp has proven to be one of the top writers here . I wish him nothing but the best . He ranks up there with Todd and Stang ,

What an enticing story. Thank you.

Ed

This is my second read and I have one small corrective suggestion.

His thought that she had cheated on him, give knowlege of all that had transpired, was glaringly out of place. Should you re-read that part I think you'll agree.

That said a GREAT story.

If you are reading these could please let us know if you're still writing?

Many contributing writers try to write compelling stories-in my opinion many falling short-but they try.

You succeed!

You created a fun and entertaining tale with just enough drama to make it an excellent story. Well done 5/5

This was a very strange story but very original. I gave it 5 stars for sure.

I've never been into supernatural stuff, but this is well written and developed. Great sex. Great story.

i love it when you mix science fiction into your stories. 5 stars!

One helluva mystery interspersed with "What would I do if that happened to my wife?" Anyway, enjoyed it all - Great job, Author!

Excellent! Really kept me going! I will read this again soon.

Jim

REALLY, ANOTHER CUCK HUSBAND AND A CHEATING SKANK WIFE

Interestingly different! Almost expected to hear Rod Sterling’s voice. Well done! -5-

Marvelously crafted Story! Definitely five-star material! Thank you so very much for sharing!

Great story!

Certainly a different perspective. I sorta hate RAAC, but this idea is certainly an exception worth following.

With all the strange stuff in the world, it’s not too far fetched

What a wonderful slant to a story.

Thanks, loved it.

HappyFrank

Wonderful imagination and well written story

I love this, and I would love to see this on the screen! I think some of your stories would make such excellent movies. Very well done!!

Fun little twist!!

Men are fucking stupid like this MC whose wife is busy cuckolding him.

I agree with the idea that this could be the basis of a movie script.

Engrossing from start to finish and I enjoyed it very much, it reminds me of the old Twilight Zone stories back in the days of yore! A big 5 star yarn to me even if I'm EE with a "show me" mind.

Interesting and fun.

Amazing story. I loved it. 😊

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Holee Chit Hombre!

That was gut wrenching (and the invisible onion slicing ninjas showed up as well).

Excellente!

11/10 78's!!!!!

I love many of your stories and at least like most of your series. But this left me cold. Well written but not for me.

Awesome story! I think of a great movie.

Quite imaginative.

Very well done!

Well done. Quite different from your usual fare.

Your creative writing ability is so.ply amazing and awe-inspiring.

5 stars.

Of course.

""I have an idea," I said. "I don't know if it'll work, but at this point, I'm ready to try just about anything. Maybe I can help Vikki find her way back. And I think that old Victrola may be the key." She nodded her head."

That SHOULD have been ""I have an idea," I said. "I don't know if it'll work, but at this point, I'm ready to try just about anything. Maybe I can help TERRI find her way back. And I think that old Victrola may be the key." She nodded her head."

Many other silly errors??

Thanks for another absorbing and uplifting tale! Love your fascinating imagination!!

Really Jack, too caught up in your fucked up mind

Not really my kind of entertainment but have to admit that, for some reason, there was a compulsion to keep on reading until the end!!

It seems unrealistic that expert neurosurgeons from Johns Hopkins would consider "exploratory surgery" on the brain of a patient with negative/normal brain scans, MRIs, etc. If you can't see some abnormality on standard images of the brain, there won't be anything to see or "fix" when you open the cranium.

Just my thoughts. Am not a neurological surgeon.