All Comments on 'Amy'

I enjoyed your story, the open and friendly nature of Amy and the matter-of-fact style as written. However, I wondered why you did not write the dialogue conventionally with quotation marks and breaks for each speech. I think it would make the story more intimate, immediate and erotic! Thanks for the effort!

Small issue: interest is piqued, not peaked.

2nd read, thank you for sharing!

I could be a devotee easily.