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by TheoGully

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Grammer

Sorry, you need an edit - this just sounds so wrong, it is "Mark and I" - as in "I went to town", not "Me went to town".

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Keep at it and trolls suck.

Keep at it , work with a editor and don't let the trolls stop you. Good concept.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Too Abrupt

If Amy and Mark loved enough to marry, how did Mark leave so quickly?

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