by secretlover55
Really liked it very much. Would love to see this passion grow.... Do not stop writing...
... to at least two or three more chapters. If this was to be a one off then you clipped it too soon.
Tony seems a very healthy and masculine 40 year old man. How about a dusting of chest hair for Amy to play with? When will she see and perhaps suck his cock?
I gave this four out of five. The story was excellent but like everyone is saying. could be longer....