All Comments on 'Amy - A Young Woman's First Love'

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tabbymidnitetabbymidniteabout 9 years ago
Bring on the next part

Really liked it very much. Would love to see this passion grow.... Do not stop writing...

acupacupabout 9 years ago
Good start...

... to at least two or three more chapters. If this was to be a one off then you clipped it too soon.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Sex?

Tony seems a very healthy and masculine 40 year old man. How about a dusting of chest hair for Amy to play with? When will she see and perhaps suck his cock?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
too short....

I gave this four out of five. The story was excellent but like everyone is saying. could be longer....

Paisley_17Paisley_17almost 9 years ago
Amazing!

One of my favorite stories I have found so far! Keep writing!

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