by AzureAsh
Ash - Pay no attention to the critic. This is an inconventional piece, as is its companion, but both are filled with a frenetic passion, joy, and amazing vocabulary! ("consanguineous"!!!!) It's 5 stars for this one.
Oh, and here's what I would change about it: NOTHING!
Thank you so much for your kind words. It's incredibly heartening to see you appreciate the soul of the narrative. Ash :)
I had something like this happen. After my cousin committed suicide, while sorting through his things we found a note he had written to me. I was the only one he came out to. I accepted him as is. The note was about his love for me. I am not gay but I still love him. This story brought back those feelings.