by DG Hear
This one has the undefinable ring of truth. I particularly enjoyed the simple normality the understated truth of the dialogue and narrative. No overblown over the top romantic barring of berets or shouting paeans of everlasting love from the mountaintops here. No this is Harry met Sally stuff. Two childhood friends discovering their surprising and deep affection that over time quietly matures into a true happy ever after that of the best sort. This story celebrates Everyman. The knight wears welders hats and gloves.and the princess castle is a used trailer home. This is the celebration of transformative love in everyday circumstances. This is the hard working Everyman and woman creating that safe place, that transcendental miracle in the mundane we call “home.”
This one feels too real to be anything less than a personal narrative. If so I heartily commend the author on a life well lived! Of course 5 stars!
5*
I like the theme of childhood friends finding their way together as adults. Thanks for sharing.
Nice story. I was wondering what happened to you. Again welcome back!
JC
very nice little story. 5⭐
I note however that it has the qualities of its faults: simple and without surprise.
Thank you for sharing your talent.
You MUST continue writing. You have a writing style that captivates the reader. Great story, by the way!!!
Such a sweet story, loved it but wish there was more (as with every story I like). 5*
A so lovely story 5 stars, so happy seeing you write such beautiful stories again.
Keep the good work.
Hi DG Hear,
I had trouble getting on DG Hear ( forgot passwords and got a new computer and on line service), Signed up with DG Hear2 and contacted Laurel who helped me get back on my original name. Also Thank you to everyone who reads my stories. Comment if you like, I have broad shoulders. haha I do understand we don't all think alike. Just remember they are just stories and my feelings while writing them.
With Respect
DG Hear
She told me she got accepted at a cheerleader college in Texas. rofl is that a real thing cheerleader college lol. got to be the dumbest college. and a welding college? think ur mixing up trade-schools with colleges
"I don't have anything to do with him. He is strictly in the past. I don't even know where he went after graduation." was that a lie to us readers or a lie to the MC or did her mom not tell her ray came to visit?
this is how jaded i am. this read like a setup story for a cheating with story with ray coming back into the picture and the celeb football player. then naming it February Sucks lol
Anonymous about 3 hours ago
Why publish under two different names? ? why this comment, think u might be commenting on a diff story there was nothing said about this author posting under other names and who cares if he does
A lovely, romantic story. You have built two really attractive characters that the reader can relate to. Your writing style is both highly readable and engaging. Well done!
It's comforting to get to read something that has heart. Of course it was a five.
carvohi
Sweet little story here with a feel good ending for sure. If it had been my story, I probably would have kept it to one POV, but otherwise easy 5* good to see new material from a great like DG. Thanks for sharing,
Rnebular
A very beautiful and touching story. I look forward to reading more of your work.
I like most of your commentators really enjoyed your story of Amy and Jerry. It just fitted in with my mood at the moment. I also felt there was a ring of truth to it. You can never disguise the reality in some of these stories. I don't know if I have come across you before will have to read a few more of your stories to find out. Five stars.
A good solid story! Entertaining and well written - I can’t ask for anything else for a good reading time!
Happy to have you back writing. I hope you enjoy writing as much as I enjoy reading!!
If you keep writing I will keep reading!
Wow, another great love story. DG as a fan of your stories, thank you for coming back and giving us your readers such a treat with your 2 new stories. This story as in your other stories was well written, had great characters and was a pleasure to read. Well Done. 5-stars
There was no need to blanch a bit about Amy sexual experience. It would be perfectly acceptable for Amy to have much more experience and by that enhance the competitiveness by marriage
Nice romance, but I think I would have preferred a bit more conflict between Boy Meets Girl and Happily Ever After. Thanks for your story and thanks for coming back.
This masterpiece of tenderness certainly rings true for several reasons, one of them being the dialogue. Thanks and 5*+++
BJ
Many revere fame and the dollar, I've always put a good story or book above those. They last forever and are there for us all thanks to the writers who share their imaginations with the rest of us. Thank you DG and all the rest.
Like many others who have enjoyed your tales we were afraid the well ran dry, glad you are still around, better yet still writing.
somewhere east of Omaha
Enjoying your stories for the first time. Thanks for sharing your time and efforts. I do appreciate it!
An old curmudgeon
Glad to see you are back and still as good as you always were.
Regretfully I had to give it only 5* as that's the max..
Suddenly the whore Amy had sex only a few times....what a joke!! She only came back because the pussywhipped cuck Jerry was now a businessman