All Comments on 'Amy Was Once My Best Friend'

by DG Hear

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servant111servant111over 2 years ago

This one has the undefinable ring of truth. I particularly enjoyed the simple normality the understated truth of the dialogue and narrative. No overblown over the top romantic barring of berets or shouting paeans of everlasting love from the mountaintops here. No this is Harry met Sally stuff. Two childhood friends discovering their surprising and deep affection that over time quietly matures into a true happy ever after that of the best sort. This story celebrates Everyman. The knight wears welders hats and gloves.and the princess castle is a used trailer home. This is the celebration of transformative love in everyday circumstances. This is the hard working Everyman and woman creating that safe place, that transcendental miracle in the mundane we call “home.”

This one feels too real to be anything less than a personal narrative. If so I heartily commend the author on a life well lived! Of course 5 stars!

Boyd PercyBoyd Percyover 2 years ago

Glad you are writing again!

5

SequoiaSempervirensSequoiaSempervirensover 2 years ago

5*

I like the theme of childhood friends finding their way together as adults. Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago
Welcome back!

Nice story. I was wondering what happened to you. Again welcome back!

JC

jakie1jakie1over 2 years ago

Thank you, have always appreciated your stories, welcome back!

francemanfrancemanover 2 years ago

very nice little story. 5⭐

I note however that it has the qualities of its faults: simple and without surprise.

Thank you for sharing your talent.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

You MUST continue writing. You have a writing style that captivates the reader. Great story, by the way!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Why publish under two different names?

Slick742Slick742over 2 years ago

Glad you are back. Thank you for the uplifting story. SK742

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Such a sweet story, loved it but wish there was more (as with every story I like). 5*

alexetlaurealexetlaureover 2 years ago

A so lovely story 5 stars, so happy seeing you write such beautiful stories again.

Keep the good work.

DG HearDG Hearover 2 years agoAuthor

Hi DG Hear,

I had trouble getting on DG Hear ( forgot passwords and got a new computer and on line service), Signed up with DG Hear2 and contacted Laurel who helped me get back on my original name. Also Thank you to everyone who reads my stories. Comment if you like, I have broad shoulders. haha I do understand we don't all think alike. Just remember they are just stories and my feelings while writing them.

With Respect

DG Hear

enderlocke77enderlocke77over 2 years ago

She told me she got accepted at a cheerleader college in Texas. rofl is that a real thing cheerleader college lol. got to be the dumbest college. and a welding college? think ur mixing up trade-schools with colleges

enderlocke77enderlocke77over 2 years ago

"I don't have anything to do with him. He is strictly in the past. I don't even know where he went after graduation." was that a lie to us readers or a lie to the MC or did her mom not tell her ray came to visit?

enderlocke77enderlocke77over 2 years ago

this is how jaded i am. this read like a setup story for a cheating with story with ray coming back into the picture and the celeb football player. then naming it February Sucks lol

enderlocke77enderlocke77over 2 years ago

Anonymous about 3 hours ago

Why publish under two different names? ? why this comment, think u might be commenting on a diff story there was nothing said about this author posting under other names and who cares if he does

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

A lovely, romantic story. You have built two really attractive characters that the reader can relate to. Your writing style is both highly readable and engaging. Well done!

TonyspencerTonyspencerover 2 years ago

A really nice romance, thank you.

carvohicarvohiover 2 years ago

It's comforting to get to read something that has heart. Of course it was a five.

carvohi

RanDog025RanDog025over 2 years ago

Excellent story worth 5 BIG STARS!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

GREAT STORY,YOU HAVENT LOST YOUR TOUCH.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Simply WONDERFUL!

ItlNYJewItlNYJewover 2 years ago
Just wanted to say....

It's good to have you back and writing again!

rnebularrnebularover 2 years ago

Sweet little story here with a feel good ending for sure. If it had been my story, I probably would have kept it to one POV, but otherwise easy 5* good to see new material from a great like DG. Thanks for sharing,

Rnebular

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Absolutely loved the story Thanks for sharing

linnearlinnearover 2 years ago

A very beautiful and touching story. I look forward to reading more of your work.

moralcompassmoralcompassover 2 years ago

A very happy return, please continue to entertain us.

DevilbobyDevilbobyover 2 years ago

I like most of your commentators really enjoyed your story of Amy and Jerry. It just fitted in with my mood at the moment. I also felt there was a ring of truth to it. You can never disguise the reality in some of these stories. I don't know if I have come across you before will have to read a few more of your stories to find out. Five stars.

SplitGeode66SplitGeode66over 2 years ago

Korea this story. Welcome back, and please keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Nice and touching premise. Shame about the clunky dialog.

KenfromIndyKenfromIndyover 2 years ago

A good solid story! Entertaining and well written - I can’t ask for anything else for a good reading time!

Happy to have you back writing. I hope you enjoy writing as much as I enjoy reading!!

If you keep writing I will keep reading!

kamdev99008kamdev99008over 2 years ago

Love tale of two hearts destined to each other...

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Such a loving story of young love

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Good growing up romance.

Rancher46Rancher46over 2 years ago

Wow, another great love story. DG as a fan of your stories, thank you for coming back and giving us your readers such a treat with your 2 new stories. This story as in your other stories was well written, had great characters and was a pleasure to read. Well Done. 5-stars

Paumen1969Paumen1969over 2 years ago

There was no need to blanch a bit about Amy sexual experience. It would be perfectly acceptable for Amy to have much more experience and by that enhance the competitiveness by marriage

studebakerhawkstudebakerhawkover 2 years ago

Nice romance, but I think I would have preferred a bit more conflict between Boy Meets Girl and Happily Ever After. Thanks for your story and thanks for coming back.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Jerry is a desperate obsessed loser and Amy is just a bitch

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

This masterpiece of tenderness certainly rings true for several reasons, one of them being the dialogue. Thanks and 5*+++

BJ

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Many revere fame and the dollar, I've always put a good story or book above those. They last forever and are there for us all thanks to the writers who share their imaginations with the rest of us. Thank you DG and all the rest.

Like many others who have enjoyed your tales we were afraid the well ran dry, glad you are still around, better yet still writing.

somewhere east of Omaha

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Enjoying your stories for the first time. Thanks for sharing your time and efforts. I do appreciate it!

An old curmudgeon

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Welcome back! Great read.

Starwolf1961Starwolf1961over 1 year ago

Love your writing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Make sure you heart strings are strong before reading. A 5

myassisdraginmyassisdraginover 1 year ago

Glad to see you are back and still as good as you always were.

Regretfully I had to give it only 5* as that's the max..

afosi2604afosi2604over 1 year ago

Another enjoyable read by DGHear. 5*...

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Very enjoyable read

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Generic ):

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Suddenly the whore Amy had sex only a few times....what a joke!! She only came back because the pussywhipped cuck Jerry was now a businessman

NitpicNitpicabout 1 year ago
Decent

Decent story.Anon 01/27/23 should stick to Marvel comics.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

It got real syrupy at the end.

AnonymousAnonymous7 days ago

Thanks again for the read (its been a couple years)

somewhere east of Omaha

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