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All Comments on 'Amy's Anal Adventure with Alice Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
tenderly written

You were well inside the heads of your characters - all emotions explored and well described for the enjoyment of your readers. I for one thank you.

More in the same captivating vein please

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Interesting storyline. Waiting for the follow ups when they all graduate from college.

I am assuming you are dictating the story. You need to find a proofreader as I noticed a number of errors. They tend to make me stop and backup to decide what you want to say. Thanks for the best innovation I have read in a long time.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
A step too far?

I love the initial seductions but felt that as soon as it got to 4 people it was a step too far. I love fiction but.......But keep writing!

bluesbobluesbo12 months ago

How come Todd never gets to fuck Alice in the ass?

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