All Comments on 'Amy's Smile Ch. 01'

and I hope we "see" you a LOT MORE soon. I just finished the first chapter of Amy's Smile, and I ~really~ love the way you have so generously sprinkled the story with the sweet sugar of your wit and sense of humor. You had me rolling at times, plus all of my own imaginations of what's to come. Thanks for writing, Jayne!!

Too bad I can't rate it higher than 100%...lol. Your are a fantastic writer. I loved The Human Condition series and I really look forward to reading the remaining chapters in the Amy's Smile series. You had me laughing out loud with this one....your profile says you are female, but I swear you write as if you really are a guy. I see it has been quite a while since you have made any new submissions (in fact, I hope you are even still around to read this) but I hope that you do eventually come back and make more wonderful contributions!!!! :)

Someone posted a recent comment about this story and now I'm hooked. I'm off to read the other chapters.

...just impressive. Damn, I can't find any better words to describe this reading experience. ...hmm, stunning would fit in nicely I guess.

Well, I am off for the next chapter.

Thanks for this little gem!

and I can't wait to invite a dear, long-lost friend to read this! i read the whole thing a year or so ago, and I had forgotten just HOW GOOD it is!

love your gift of storytelling,so thrilled you share with us readers.gotta go,need to read chapter 2.annay

You have such a wonderful sense of humor & you keep it very realistic. WONDERFUL writing!

I realize that this story is a little sad, but I can't quit laughing. This needs to be in a comedy section. I can't tell you how much I have enjoyed this chapter. Do you by chance write for the show 2and1/2 men. You should!!!! Off to the next chapter... but this one is going to be hard to follow.

This is a fantastic story that goes on for 8 chapters and ends in the middle. I wish I'd never started it. It's great, it's engaging and its been unfinished for the past 6 years

This story is not finished do not read!!!!! Chapter 8 is not the conclusion.

FWIW, someone else, not jfinn, finished off the series. It's a well written and touching series, well worth the read. Don't let the absence of a conclusion by the original author stop you.

who finished it???

His stories are here in the romance category.

he's still in high school being the miserable ass he was then. when-and if-he ever grows, maybe he'll be amy's equal. what a total self-centered clod.

I have not laughed that much in a while. Based on the dates in your profile you don't contribute any more but you should.

***** Stars

Miriam doing the makeover-my thoughts exactly

I gave 5 stars to all 8 chapters, but the 9th and final is missing. You will be left hanging.

while it is a great shame that Jfinn never finished this themselves it was completed to a very good standard. clink here for the conclusion

https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=1293948&page=submissions

Ch 8 is not the end and there is no Ch 9.