All Comments on 'Amy's Smile Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Wow!

Great storytelling, off to read chapter 3.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Terrific

I really enjoy your writing style; genuine, funny and very well composed. Thanks for you efforts!

Senrab13Senrab13over 13 years ago
Rainy Tuesday

It's pouring rain so I decided to just stay home and read stories as usual. But, there is nothing usual about this story. VERY well done!

GimletEdgeGimletEdgeover 12 years ago
This has many "laugh out loud" moments.

It's one of my favorite in the Romance genre.

Try it; you'll like it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
You went too far making Charlie an asshole

Amy is cute but Charlie is such an unlikeable douchebag he makes this almost unreadable.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Love it!!!!!

Absolutely love it -sense of humour,dry wit,sarcasm. It just keeps getting better and better

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Tears in my eyes from laughing?

This is really funny stuff!

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