All Comments on 'Amy's Spring Break Ch. 02'

This story had every earmark of something I'd never come back to, but each time it about went there, you did a 180 and revitalized it! There's something gleeful to it, bound up in the whole 'running with it' that gives a sensuality to it's flow.

I'd love to read more about Amy's odd flexibility. Maybe Angela could go into more detail about her fantasies (that just came true!), or even see her have something similar happen to her?

I think that your writing is very vivid, and colorful. The content is also well put together, and is not to complex for your style of writing. I did notice several small errors, but nothing you need to worry about. Thank you for all of your writing.

Definitely needs another chapter following this. Also, will Kira ever get to fight for Amy too? Im liking the love triangle

You definitely need a chapter after this one.You really made my cock hard.Make a nether one please!