All Comments on 'Amy's Vacation Ch. 02'

Amy and Daddy's erotic vacation has officially begun! I hope you have mapped out several chapters of erotic fun and fantasy, that Amy and Daddy can fulfill.

Please continue, you are headed in the right direction.

Again, great story line set in a great location. Only other comment might be that the dialogue and action moves a bit quickly, not a lot of development. That said, I am anxiously awaiting the next chapter.

Nice continuation - looking forward to more chapters and the holiday continuing.

By the time the vacation is over amy should be able to tell daddy that he will be a father and eventually show him a beautiful baby bump

Is Amy on birth control? Did Daddy just get her pregnant?

You've got us hooked!

For Anonymous that claims it is plagiarism: That's a stout charge. Can you back it up? If not, then you ought to be quiet.

Great Ch. 02, left me wanting more..MORE and MORE!

Thanks.....

What will the maid think... Only one bed to make up?

at 38 DDD, your story tho

I didn't want it to end. I want more

Sorry, liked it until the 38DDD, of course, that's perfectly normal for an eighteen yr old cheer-leader in the good old USA. I'm wondering if you've been contaminated by the `orange-man's' make-up, after-all, he'd be drawn to something that big. Please just imagine the weight and discomfort they would be. What's next daddy's cock is a foot long. Also not mention of birth-control, getting your daughter up the duff, is a no-no.

is a bit over the top, but the rest is fairly decent. Need to remember to spell check and proof read. Still, looking forward to reading the next few chapters over the next couple of days.

And I think probable with this author

And what matter is it; enjoy the rest of this wonderful story.

"...38DDD (and sometimes E!) cup breasts..." are supposed to be a cheerleader's boobs? Not unless she's had massive implants or she's a very chubby girl. That "38" is the inches around her rib cage, NOT around the highest/widest point of her breasts. Also, she succumbs way too easily to sex with her father, which means this isn't the first time they've had sex. But the story implies that it IS the first time considering her surprise when daddy comes into the dressing room to check out the neon bikini. Bottom line is the story is confusing. Is she a well-experienced slut, or is she an almost innocent that daddy is now claiming as his own?

Despite the complaints about the DDD boobs... I fully loved this... "I'm not wet, you're wet!" lol

Bare Amy83, I think you are a talented young writer and once I started reading your first chapter I knew I was a fan forever. I like your style and I want to read the next chapter as soon as possible. I know my beautiful wife will love your story as much as I do. We love to role play our favorite characters and it sounds like we are going to love being an incestous Daddy and Daughter (I hope to impregnate my Amy at some point).

Loved you, Slimdick

So beautifully written, Amy! I love how you describe the scenes in great detail, building up to daddy and his girl enjoying together their first moments in Jamaica.

A step up in pace from chapter 1. The writing is good and well paced....but plausibility is a problem for me.

Sorry, you lost me at 38DDD.

if i were the dad...

i'd fuck her silly, of course...

You started with past tense and wound up using present tense. Choose a tense and stick with it. Poor writing.

I agree with GrandEagle53, AND Anonymous.

D cup tits are too big, let alone DDD.

When you changed tenses, I quit reading.

Ditto on the DDD. I quit also.

Ohhhhh.....Amy's gonna have a GREAT vacation! I'm think'n that thick cock of Daddy's is going to be the focus of her vacation.... aside from the sun soaked beaches perhaps?

Great story. Like it all so far.

Oh my! Can I be you're Daddy? I'll give that scene a "Two Flames Up." 🔥🔥 Smokin Hot!

Na, not for me.