All Comments on 'Amy's Vacation Ch. 03'

Waiting, not going to let go just yet...

I thought that this might have gone father than it did.....

But it's too early for you to get shared...

Can't wait for the rest.

When they get to their bungalow it should be to spend the night with daddy's cock in her pussy filling it with his cum

This chapter is up to your expected standard. Please keep the sexual tensions building. Amy has a lot of love to give her Daddy. And Daddy will return it all in kind.

I like the progress so far, I think this vaca is opening a lot of her desires

The first three chapters are wonderful and I can't wait to read more.

Great start to this story keep it up. Hope pt 4 comes soon.

You've really scored here it seems you really enjoyed daddy's touch. I am also an old romantic sadly now single.

Reading Amy’s words, I’m there I’m part of the story. Simply amazing.

“...these people are so happy! I love it!). He had a thick accent, but spoke English well...”

“These people”?

You know that the official language of Jamaica *is* English, right?

I enjoy your dragging the story out. We all knew what was going to happen but you are telling a romantic take and not just porn.

well done Amy

John

Wow, Amy! Your detailed depictions of the various scenes, literally put me in Jamaica. Love how you describe the people and places that daddy and his girl visit. And of course, love the description of daddy making his sweet little angel cum in this story.

I think your writing is excellent and very descriptive drawing a nice picture. As much as I love the premise of the story again for me it fails the plausibility test. If that element was more accurate the story would be stunning.

38DDD with no bra???

Also, fun fact: Jamaica is one of the most homophobic islands in the Caribbean and has laws against same-sex acts.

Series was okay but I'm unable to suspend belief this far.

Mmmmm.... I LOVE your writing skills.... the way you describe things... PERFECT!

Great chapter. I could see myself watching w/ delight on the beach as the story is being read.

What a beautiful story

Great story

I'm ordering you a Mario's mango madness, Amy. I like the way you dance us through a scene so gracefully. It's like you're doing a Balero, which places an emphasis on smoothness.