All Comments on 'Amy's Weekend'

by CorsetLvr

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HughJardHughJardover 19 years ago
wonderful

wonderful. this story has great passion. i loved it. i wnat to read more by corsetlvr; a lot more.

thank you.

PeggyNPumpsPeggyNPumpsover 18 years ago
So exciting

Wonderful story interestingly written from the male perspective

don87654don87654over 18 years ago
Intriguing--And Only Natural

This definitely needs a continuation or two.....Perhaps Amy's weekend can turn into a time that she is ovulating without her fully realizing it, and you can dump some sperm into her cervix in the process, so she can go home to her returning husband with a bit of you in her belly, growing for the next 9 months?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
YES YES

I am so wet :)

XXNoraJeanXXXXNoraJeanXXover 16 years ago
Very well done!

Simply loved it! Oh, to be Amy... :) Your writing is beautiful. I liked that you wrote it as the male...made it even more interesting. I think my fave was the sandwich, but the double headed dildo is a close 2nd. :) Thx!! NoraJean

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Lets say I was overcum

Great and well writing story had to have a few pumoing breaks to ease my tension great must read again and again

BluegrayBluegrayabout 15 years ago
Another great

One more scintillating story by CorsteLvr. Wonderful descriptions of an exciting weekend, if only I could have at least watched. Your writing certainly brings the action alive for me and once again has seriously aroused this horny old guy. Back to reading more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Good premise.

But sex hapens much too automatically. Too mechanically.

Needed extended foreplay and teasing first.

You wrote "...wherein...". You meant WERE IN.

Three stars.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

ok...

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