by CorsetLvr
wonderful. this story has great passion. i loved it. i wnat to read more by corsetlvr; a lot more.
thank you.
Wonderful story interestingly written from the male perspective
This definitely needs a continuation or two.....Perhaps Amy's weekend can turn into a time that she is ovulating without her fully realizing it, and you can dump some sperm into her cervix in the process, so she can go home to her returning husband with a bit of you in her belly, growing for the next 9 months?
Simply loved it! Oh, to be Amy... :) Your writing is beautiful. I liked that you wrote it as the male...made it even more interesting. I think my fave was the sandwich, but the double headed dildo is a close 2nd. :) Thx!! NoraJean
Great and well writing story had to have a few pumoing breaks to ease my tension great must read again and again
One more scintillating story by CorsteLvr. Wonderful descriptions of an exciting weekend, if only I could have at least watched. Your writing certainly brings the action alive for me and once again has seriously aroused this horny old guy. Back to reading more.
Good premise.
But sex hapens much too automatically. Too mechanically.
Needed extended foreplay and teasing first.
You wrote "...wherein...". You meant WERE IN.
Three stars.