All Comments on 'An Abnormal Relationship'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Amazing story ...

I can't wait for more as their delicious relationship blossoms and grows. I LOVE YOU Fantaseeboy!!!

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooover 4 years ago
The epitome of love

Tender and loving. Wonderful where her finger was tapping. This story is so beautiful it could go on forever.

Oldergenteman69Oldergenteman69over 4 years ago
Lovely Story

Of a Mom pleasing her son. I hope there will be more chapters!

kriss4912kriss4912over 4 years ago
Tender

What a wonderful tender story the total love shared by son and mother perfection

ROCKY70ROCKY70over 4 years ago
I HOPE YOU HAVE A PART 2 IN THE WORKS???.^*!^*!^*!

This story is to good to just end. Also you can't stop,TRISTAN has not told mom what he wants next. Good read, well done. THANKS

satinpantyboysatinpantyboyover 4 years ago
Simply awesome!

I love the erotic descriptions of mother’s hands on his penis. It would only be better if she were wearing a diaphanous gown and he called her “mommy.”

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Very exiting

Maybe Tristan could ask his mom if he could sniff her panties and inhaling her erotic musk while she tenderly and lovingly masturbates him.

petskunkpetskunkover 4 years ago
To My Amazement

This is not generally the type of story I read. But, I was intrigued by the description of the son. He was far different from our usual views of sons in incest stories. He was not a jock or a nerd. I enjoyed the development of the story and would like to read more. Got a five from me. Thanks for sharing your story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
I hope over time she makes him her slave

and he becomes addicted to her pussy. I hope he licks and eats and bathes her and his face is always on her clit licking and sucking. Maybe she has a BF and he can cum inher and the boy can clean her. inally he gets to fuck her with his little dick

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Good writing

A sign of good writing is shown when the writer plays with the reader's imagination.

No part two is needed. I suggest that fantasee boy develops other stories that also play with the reader's mind.

Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Five stars!

Amazing! I loved this story a lot.

Please continue. It needs at least a part 2... or more.

DiaperboyMiDiaperboyMiover 2 years ago

That was Amazing!!!!!!!

4yourpleasureiam4yourpleasureiamabout 2 years ago

Yes Mother, Please slide your finger into me. Be in me. Oh Mother be in me.

loborojotxloborojotx9 months ago

Awesomely HOTT!!!! Oh Mommy!!!

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