All Comments on 'An Absence of Trust'

good, but long, story. i might like a different ending by someone though... she needs to be way more burned and ol' Robert got off way too easy...

i'd like to see a re-written ending with more btb. also, ol' Robert got off way too easy.

What a wonderful story of a 'smart jock' who does really well by using his brain. Hope for him?

To quote the Beetles, "Bang Bang Maxwell's Silver Hammer Came Down On Her Head".

re·venge

/rəˈvenj/

noun

the action of inflicting hurt or harm on someone for an injury or wrong suffered at their hands.

Bunch of people said how could you say there was no revenge

Robert shot himself, our hero did nothing

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Tiffee went on the lam, after being investigated for embezzlement, an investigation that started before he fucked the slut - again our hero did nothing

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But what about the fall down the stairs you ask? That was engineered so he could "catch" them as he walked in the door, he didnt intend for that level of injury and revenge is about intent

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The whore, he told his friends the truth about the whore being a whore, that isnt revenge, one of his freinds was a journalist, she did her job. Bitching to a friend who did their job is NOT revenge

God damn I get so sick and tired of the bullshit, 'my instinct was to go to her and hold and make her feel safe'

This guy was floating between a pussy simp and an actual man.

A Republican in the most fascist, left wing Democrat city in the world??? COME ON!