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All Comments on 'An Affair to Remember Ch. 01'
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Anonymousover 9 years agoHot
Amazing for your first effort. Good plot. Can do better though. Waiting for next chapter.
Maru9over 9 years agoLike it.
Amazing for your first attempt. Plot is good. I like some background in the story before people start screwing. Descriptions can be better but since its your first story that's pardonable. Will wait to read chapter 2.
Anonymousover 9 years agoNever try to tell us something is "true"
No one believes you and nobody cares. And it doesn't help the storyline at all.
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