All Comments on 'An Alaska Tundra Adventure'

Well done! Five stars!

Your stories are always outstanding.

Delightful story!

5

Well I suppose it was a wild goose chase but at least Amanda found love. Another delightful tale from the author.

Next you'll be writing a romance that features Bremsstrahlung Radiation and 30mm chain guns, A perfect romance, of course. You've covered damn near everything else.

Great job. Always a pleasure when you stories show up

It is always a pleasure to read another of your stories. The characters are relatable no matter the era, I especially like you have all natural women for the female lead.

Another great story. Thank you

This is not my favorite category, but your stories make it worth jumping into the Romance section. This was another very good story. 5 stars

5 stars ...what else !

Creative and original romance!

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Absolutely lovely, thank you for posting such a feel good story.

Little too cliche of an ending for you but a great story that kept me reading. 4.6*

Fun as usual.

Nice aircraft stuff...

Always a very good read and a wonderful story.

Great story as usual. I was hoping they would eventually find the diamonds, but love was certainly better!

At the beginning of the story it was 'Bearing Sea' later it changed to 'Bering', which is what I see in Google maps. Just something for the next time you're editing. It certainly didn't take away from an entertaining story. Thanks for posting.

Nice story, but it's "Bering" not "Bearing".

Loved your story -- Amanda and Matt grow slowly into their love. Love their descriptions -- her breasts, nipples that poke his chest, his cock, her hairy mound. Loved the hairy chest on Matt -- they fit so well together! Thanks for writing a love story!

Good story as is usual for your work. One detail though: on the first two pages, you refer to the bodies of water as "Bearing" Sea & Strait. Need to lose the "a". On later pages its correctly spelled as "Bering".

For Amanda, I think Matt is the real treasure she found. And the same goes for Matt in finding Amanda. Loved their descriptions -- and sleeping together in the sleeping bag was a perfect way for her to caress his hairy chest, abs, and cock -- and then to make love together. Loved the way you brought the story to a conclusion!

Main male character seemed a bit unsecure about his education condisiding his extensive schooling,good story .

Good story. Need that editor though. Bering to Bearing and back to Bering. Tsk. 😶

After all the comments on Bering, Bearing, Yurovski or Kurovski or whatsoever: as usual a great story, thank you very much! I enjoyed it!

As usual, I love the background, the setting, and all the details. I was a bit slow to warm up to Amanda, with her deceit and lack of preparation. She didn’t seem like a compelling person to me, but I’m glad she turned it around for the happy ending.

It’s another winner for me, so thank you for writing and thank you for sharing your work.

Really enjoyed this story, and especially liked the basics of flying a plane with pontoons—always wondered about the extra drag of the water.

Cheers.

Still a good story. I say "still" because I have read it before, probably on this site. 5*

I have to say you come up with Very unique plots and i just love your writing a. Thanks for sharing this.....

An very good tale well told.

Like all your stories it was wonderful. Thank you very much.

I thought you balanced the story well in length, detail and development. While there's a few things that tell me I should say something, they're not overwhelming enough to list. I'll say it's a 5 and move on, as I love the idea she came looking for treasure but found her man instead.

Just about have to scratch those mosquito bites....

Sweet and well written story of people caring for each other and becoming a loving couple.

At first I was a little annoyed that with all the research you went through to create Amanda's fiction and the history of the Alaskan Native Americans you couldn't see how to spell Bering for the name of the body of water between Alaska and Siberia. Maybe it was a reverse typo that had you spell it right (inadvertently) later in the story. but in any case they certainly fell in love (lust) quickly out of necessity and all in all it wasn't a bad story considering how silly treasure hunt stories are. I gave it a 5* rating because I enjoyed it, not because it was such a great work of literature (even for Literotica). So thanks for a good read and on to something of greater quality.

Loved the story

Loved the yarn. Well told, well researched. I'll even forgive you for being "overbearing" on the spelling of the "Bering" Sea!...lol...although it did irk me the first couple of times, when it broke my chsin of thought! I deducted one star, when your story deserved five!

Aviators don't refer to any type of aircraft as a 'prop jet'. I'm pretty sure you are referring to an aircraft powered by one or more turboprop engines.

A little sketchy on the pilots ratings and what they will and won’t allow. But anyone interested can look them up.