All Comments on 'An Archer Strikes Gold'

Reasonably good story, but Greg from page 1 became Gary on page 2. ***

That is okay as Gabe is next in line and so on.!* lol

Story was good enough for a "4" though as it was kinda rough around the edges in a few places and was more into sports than explaining the actual sexual act going on.!^

Maybe she was not 'all' that good looking after all and it was all just a really good dream.! he he

Sorry about the name slip guys - it doesn't matter how many times you proof read a story something always slips through.

I take on board the comment about sport/sex imbalance and will rectify that in my next submission hopefully.