All Comments on 'An Artist & Her Passion'

I really enjoyed this story, it's always a joy to read stories where the author takes some time to write a slow build-up. I considered this a sensual and erotically stimulating story and would love some more chapters, especially as it seemed about to get slightly kinky :)

Reading this story was like being there for me, and I really got off to being there! I wonder if this story was autobiographical?

I'm so very wet from reading this sexy story. I want to be those girls, I want to watch those girls. I can smell the sex through the pages and that is what makes your story rate very high on my (sex) opinion scale. A bisexual girl myself, I love women and look for stories like this one to feed my already active fantasy life. Thanks so much for a wonderful read and a very exciting afternoon of self pleasure.

I like the slow built up of this story, I couldn't stop reading to find out what was going to happen. This is a fantasy of mine so it really turned me on. Great job!

That was great. Good story, character development and great sex scenes. Absolutly great! Keep it up. Please!

Frank Frazetta and Boris Vallejo may draw incredible pictures, but you are an incredible artist with words. Donna and especially Julia are super sexy, and the scenes were great enhanced by your brilliant writing as usual. Loved it!

I'd like to endorse the comments made by "anon. from Sweden".

A really great story that should be expanded to, at least, a novella.

I just fell in love with both the characters in this story, so much deep love for each other, wow

hOT Hot! I too am an artist and many times have fallen for my models...I always need a muse, and finding one can be a highly sensual experiece, a great exploration. I totally got off on your story, great details to constuct the reality but not deface it with trivailities. You have lived these moments, but can re-tell them even more so...I wonder where your mercury is...thanks lady.

It seems so real, I also fell in love with both the girls, I trust you will keep up your good work. Thanks

Hi Pelios

Took me most of the day t read this story, so much information, detail.

Yet rather than bog the reader down it makes the story so much more realistic, for example the comments about the sauce sticking - makes this story so so believable.

Thank you Miranda

More!!! I loved this story so much! It was sensual and sexy! esp. the part where julia fingered donna's clit while humpping her from the behind. That was incredible!

I think I have read all your stories and they are, for me, very erotic.

This is no exception. Most of your stories seem to start with straight or bi-curious women; so, I guess, that helps me identify!

Thank you for writing.

A wonderful interplay of character traits. The only thing that seemed off for me was that Julia had the religious parents, but Donna was the one with the most hang ups.

I loved the resisting and giving in that Donna wrestled with, and Julia's implacable loving seduction was irresistible. Please keep writing.

Really enjoyed reading your story, on these two lovely woman finding themselves. Yes, it's been a while since you submitted, please continue this love story.

I agree with the comment from CDLAURA. 12 years between chapters/sequels aint so bad. I fully enjoyed this story and your others and I admire the authors on this site. How someone can keep all the characters straight is beyond me. Thank you for your efforts and good writing.

BL

This was another slow burn romantic story, during which the 2 ladies grow very intimate with each other, which I appreciate so much

Beautifully written and not for the first time I wish I could experience what it is to be a woman, particularly to have multiple orgasms. I hope the next chapter was written as I enjoy pee games with a woman.

Love your style, an excellent story of sexual growth love all your tales!

Wow! you already made my come on page 2!

Very intimate and so compelling.