All Comments on 'An Egoist's Tale Ch. 02'

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Ardin ResoluteArdin Resoluteover 19 years ago
Pleasently Surprised

For an "egoist's tale", this was surprisingly NOT egotistical, especially when you consider most of the "big black cock" stories out there. The protagonist seems to care about the nun, and seemed protective of her. I thought the "decent" of the nun was far less offensive than it could be (i.e. "OMG I LOVE YOUR BIG BLACK DICK FUCK ME NOW") and seemed like she was actually changing her views on sex. It could be better, but then it'd be less erotic, I think you struck a good balance, and I commend you on it. There's no in between 75 and 100, but you definitely don't deserve a 75, so you get your 100.

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