All Comments on 'An Elegant Woman'

I know what the writer was trying to do with the pretentious beginning, but he just doesn't have the skill to bring it off. Sorry.

I enjoyed it. An entertaining read.

Well I liked it a lot. It developed nicely. Hope you keep writing. Try to get your anatomy right next time or just use the vernacular all the time. Vaginas don't have hair but vulvas do. Forget about the perineum in a guy, just say "balls". Tell us more about the guy next time. Thanks for a good story

Another woman who for some strange reason stays married to someone she doesn't respect or love. Or is this just sex?

Frankly, found the story rather curious. Couldn't really suspend my disbelief. One the other hand, the writing itself was very well done. So a 100% for your trying, entirely successful or not, with being experimental. Down with the 'formula' story!

A little slow on the build up, but a good ending. Would like to see it head down the path of wild sex and different encounters like your Lincoln Park Kelly series!

Really great read and excellent fun. Sexy characters and just what I come to this site for.

Thanks!

This story like all of the author's turned me on like none other. He is one of the most erotic writers on this site.

Thank you for another great story!!

I could see the story unfold in my mind. Good descriptions. I don't understand Anonymous' comment re "Didn't bring it off." I think he/she missed chapter two. Thanks, PW

Now I understand. The author cannot get all of those older married women he obsesses about so he writes out his fantasies to live them vicariously.

Pathetic.

and perfectly realistic.

Genuinely well-written erotica.

I wanted to like this better than the North Shore plastic tits cheater blonde. But the chronologically ambiguous scenarios in this rather teasing yarn, spreading out somewhat amorphously as they did, became somewhat ponderous. Kinda like that last sentence.

Don't get me wrong. The story keeps one moving along, and the sexplanations were quite good. But it is more lurid detail of Katherine's psychological metamorphosis to cheater wife that I wanted to fill this story out. Is Michael going soft in the wrong places? Or does he enjoy her libidinous upticks? Is this what she has been planning for a looooong time? Is this her first foray into foreign friction?

Anyway, unless hubby is in on it, you gotta be fool going along with a hottie wife having a posh little flop in the city...really? How many warmly inebriated walky-walks back to the pad from the soirée can a wickedly sexy woman take before someone tags along? I'd say about two or three. He's gotta know that she needs something he is not giving her; something hot, hard, and not too far along in years :))

Another illiterate WHORE posting cuck shit.

Just enough to jump forward as the seduction progressed step by step.

Her question at the end was rhetorical, of course he planned to seduce her, and she knew it.

Re: how often does 27 go into 43? The math answer is 1.59 times. The sexually relevant answer is as often as she wants him him to.

Great story! Thanks!

5* from me

Very entertaining and real Thanks for sharing

This is a very compelling story. The meeting. The chance meetings. The chase? The culmination. Very HOT! A 5 star rating.

Cheating whores aren’t cute or entertaining.