All Comments on 'An Elementalist Emerges'

I really enjoyed this story thurally and really really hope u will continue with it the detail is amazing and the overall story line is trully astounding

i really enjoyed this story hope u post another part

trually an amazing story keep writing cant wait for another part

trually an amazing story keep writing cant wait for another part

bigging yourself up.

this was amazing. need MUCH more of it.

I dont read gay erotica but it started out almost as just a non-erotic story (good thing i dont normally read the tags) the gay stuff i just skimed through but i read the parts with his Soul mate as well as the rest of the stoy. its good that ther is little gay stuff in it so it does not turn me off completly the parts with Kythos where great. but i am wondering why u havent brough that one (gonna go out on a limb and say Earth Elementalist) back into the story. But the plot twist with his nightmare of his teacher thats intresting. hope u plan to continue this some more. and hope u keep the gay stuff low key i dont mind it but i dont want to be turned away by such things.(nothing againt gays. just not my type of trun on.) love the charecters and stuff. so keep up the good work!